Score: 6

"it's pretty good"

submission: Blue [remix]

date: November 25, 2009

not bad for a remix. the major issue I had with it was the vocals. The first verse was good. the chorus just doesn't sound that great. I'd seperate the words and not make it sound like some drunk idiot is singing it. the second verse seems out of key. other than that, it's good. keep it up

Score: 4

"eh, it's alright"

submission: Werk Ein Progriess

date: November 22, 2009

it seems very dull right now. you definitely need reverb in there. it helps. change up the instruments so they don't all sound similar. as of right now, it sounds like you just threw a bunch of patterns together. it feels as if they don't really fit well together. make them blend together. harmonize more

it has some potential, it just needs work

Score: 9

"sweet"

submission: SN |Lost, But on Her Way| SN

date: October 26, 2009

the one complaint I have is that it needs more bass. maybe that's just me, but I just feel it's lacking the bass. other than that, keep it up. this collab should be epic

Score: 9

"not too shabby"

submission: <EagleGuard> Moon

date: October 23, 2009

yet another good piece of yours. once again, I only have one issue with it. to me, it feels as if it's lacking substance. it could do with more instruments, or more on the melody, something to kick it up a notch. other than that, it's great, so keep it up

Score: 9

"very nice"

submission: <EagleGuard> Jazzy

date: October 23, 2009

it's a great loop. I can picture exactly what you described for it. the only problem I had with it was that the sax(?) seemed too fake. I could tell it was computer generated and that brought it down a bit. other than that, it totally works. keep it up

Score: 10

"Just as well done..."

submission: Lackadaisical Cohort - Part 2

date: October 17, 2009

...if not better. I like how you can tell it's still part of the same song, but it has it's own style about it. Still very unique and able to keep the listener from getting bored. definitely an interesting use of use of sounds and instruments.

Overall, another great job. Keep up the good work

Score: 10

"very well done"

submission: Lackadaisical Cohort - Part 1

date: October 17, 2009

this is such a unique piece. it's really hard to find anything wrong with it because of this. It definitely keeps the listener's interest throughout the song, which is a good thing being 6 minutes for the first half.

Overall, great job. Going to listen to the second part now

Score: 9

"very well done"

submission: Over (Extended Mix)

date: October 14, 2009

I only have two issues with it.

1. Maybe it's just me, but it feels like the bass at the beginning (0:26) feels a bit off. It seems intentional, but without any surrounding music, something just doesn't sound right in my opinion.

2. The kick should be deeper. For me, it got slightly annoying after a while

other than that, I loved it. Keep it up

Score: 9

"pretty good"

submission: We Aren't Marketable

date: October 9, 2009

I really like the dark feel it has. true industrial right there. Once it hit :40 though, I wasn't a huge fan of the melody. It was too happy for this song if you ask me. Once that dropped out, the song flowed very well and I have nothing else I can really say is wrong with it (until the "happy" comes back at 3:50, but not that big a deal since I already mentioned it).

keep up the good work

Score: 9

"Very nice"

submission: The Illusion of Conscienceness

date: October 9, 2009

I understand it's an ensemble, so I have no complaints about the lack of substance as others have said. I especially love the build-up towards the end. I do feel, however, that some instruments are a bit weak. for example, I think that the drums overpowered the melody at the beginning in the first 19 seconds. Maybe bring that out a little bit and you've got it.