pretty good
I really like the dark feel it has. true industrial right there. Once it hit :40 though, I wasn't a huge fan of the melody. It was too happy for this song if you ask me. Once that dropped out, the song flowed very well and I have nothing else I can really say is wrong with it (until the "happy" comes back at 3:50, but not that big a deal since I already mentioned it).
keep up the good work
I felt the change of melody theme helped break the song up a bit, I didn't want the entirety of it to be grundge.
However, I'm quite pleased the song actually has a discernable 'flow'. I was quite concerned about loading this one up on NG. :P
Very nice
I understand it's an ensemble, so I have no complaints about the lack of substance as others have said. I especially love the build-up towards the end. I do feel, however, that some instruments are a bit weak. for example, I think that the drums overpowered the melody at the beginning in the first 19 seconds. Maybe bring that out a little bit and you've got it.
Continueing tinkering with volume. Clipping is gone, but some things got a tiny bit shifted off from where they were before.
Not bad
I love Journey, and this was a decent tribute to them. You made it your own, which is good, while still sticking to the main sound that the original songs had. What I didn't like that it was extremely basic. You could easily make it sound more epic by adding more instruments and sounds. A few notes seemed a bit off, and I also feel that it was rushed just a little. Take the tempo down a notch maybe.
Work on that and you've got something awesome
Ha I'm glad somebody on newgrounds likes Journey. Yea, if I have time I'll totally do something different with those three songs.
And basic is my friend when I want to pound a song out in 20 minutes.
Some chords were off... yes.
Thanks for the review, your input is appreciated for realz.
eh, not bad
the melody itself is pretty good. I like the small changes you made to make it more original. what I didn't like was the background sounds. they just seemed too fuzzy and took away from the song. maybe try changing the sound up. that will improve it a lot
eh...
it's ok. could be better, could be worse.
the random high-hat that's louder than everything else needs to go. it kills the song
is this just a bunch of clips you threw together? it doesn't sound like anything you made on your own to be honest
you're trying, and I can tell, so keep it up
nice
great pirate voice. loved it. overall, very funny script too. makes me sad that I am getting less of a chance of getting even close to winning, but at least it's to someone better than myself
dammit....
you're too good. I hope someone does justice to this by making an awesome flash. very well done. I'll just go cry now because I lost all hope of winning =(
but seriously, great job.
nice
it has a very unique sound, and I like that. the whole "24-bit" thing is pretty cool. Slightly repetitive, but I do that all the time, so it's not a big deal for me. overall, great job. keep it up
you're right
it is bad. terrible
very well done
it's hard to pull off a good 8-bit sound for most songs, but you did a great job with this one. keep it up
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