sweet
Great job with the song. The only problem I have is that I feel the melody is underpowered sometimes. Other than that, it's pretty damn good! keep up the good work
sweet
Great job with the song. The only problem I have is that I feel the melody is underpowered sometimes. Other than that, it's pretty damn good! keep up the good work
Thank you. By it being underpowered, I guess that is something I have to fix :P
It can't be perfect xD
Thanks for the 4/5 (I noticed it drop by 0.01 score, I could assume that was a 4.)
DjTyph
eh....
not the best thing I've ever heard. in the beginning, the rhythm guitar doesn't seem to fit with the lead, and that kinda kills it a bit. other than that, it's just very basic.
better
still could use some work. Put some variations on the melody every now and then to keep things different and interesting and do the same for the bass, especially from 1:45-2:00 more or less. other than that, you did a good job. the kick sounds a lot better now and it is overall improved. keep it up
well...
the melody sounds like you ripped off I'm Blue by Eiffel 65, pretty much in the way Vanilla Ice ripped off Queen by taking the bassline for Under Pressure, adding one note, and calling it his own.
The rip was actually taken from ATC - Around the world.
I just really like the riff...
Which is in the begining, the lead.
The rest is my own.
Thanks man, ...
not the worst
it is really lacking substance though. it's too basic. maybe add some more to it to spice it up. bring out the drums some more and add more to go with the melody
not bad
the synth feels really underpowered. maybe crank it up a bit. Other than that, it's great. keep it up
hmm
I'm feeling hope. that's what I get from this song.
good job. keep it up
ty -.-'
not too bad
maybe change up the melody at some point. It gets really repetitive really quickly.
other than that, it's pretty good.
Nice
I was expecting it to pick up some more as the song went on, but when it didn't, it was kind of a let-down. Other than that, it was really good!
Keep up the good work!
nice
good song. keep it up
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